"Classify"
State your name and address lady,
then tell me where you're from.
Last name first and first name last
'cause we gotta move this thing along
Rank and file and exact location --
are these the matters of identification?
I don't have answers to your questions
Not the kind of answers you seek
Fill in the blank and True or False,
Small boxes which ask for a check
"Fine" and "Good" can't be the only responses
for the question, "How are you?"
And just because it's the biggest footprint
you swear you've ever seen,
does not mean that you know at all
who I am and where I've been.
I like it. It's very clear, which I'm appreciating more and more in poetry. Well done.
ReplyDeleteWow. This is great. If this is the first attempt, I can't wait for December...
ReplyDeletewhat john said:)
ReplyDeleteI'm checking the imaginary "like" box...cause I'm facebook trained on how to respond when I like something! :)
ReplyDeleteI like this! More than anything, however, I admire your bravery. Poetry is something I've piddled at over the years, and what you're doing here is something of an inspiration to piddle once again!
ReplyDeleteI'm impressed. Thanks for your book suggestions the other day too. I'm so afraid to try poetry. Adam is amazing with poetry, but not me. I can't wait to read more.
ReplyDeleteLoved the message as much as the meter. :)